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Monday, March 1, 2010

Hey friends, don't know how many of you are gonna like this poem but it's something I wrote for people who have been pushed down by others without any valid reason, people who have got their trust broken badly by others, people who really know how it feels when you are terribly hurt and have no place to go to find peace. Do comment on this guys, enjoy reading!


The Falling Angel


Falling down from paradise,

Learning to catch your disguise,

Spreading wings to collect the stars,

As I fall from Earth – to – Mars…



Dropping tears from the sky

Living before I finally die,

Opening myself from life’s bungs

As the air departs from my lungs…



Staring down to find a place,

Finding home for my disgrace,

Leading myself to the path of hell,

As I ring the sleeping god’s bell…



Waiting for more pain to come,

Tearing my soul so I go undone,

Turning back to see my track,

As I change from white to black...

4 comments:

sammysofttech.com said...

hello..
it's very intersted.... my life same as..this words..
i m always waiting her..

Rohan said...

Aha, Rose talking about thorns eh :(

Without black you would not appreciate white and vice versa. At these times all you can do is hold yourself together.

Even if u find one person in this world you can trust with your eyes closed, you have found the kohinoor diamond :P

The poem was brilliant, everything will be fine soon, beer is the best medicine for all the emotional atyachaar's you mentioned above

Take care and best of luck :)

Cheers

@ngel ~ said...

Spreading wings to collect the stars,

As I fall from Earth – to – Mars…
( nice imagery :) )


Dropping tears from the sky

Living before I finally die,

Really Nice lines ... :)

RAM said...

r u really felt in u r heart ???really heart touching poems......nice very nice..

Monday, March 1, 2010

Hey friends, don't know how many of you are gonna like this poem but it's something I wrote for people who have been pushed down by others without any valid reason, people who have got their trust broken badly by others, people who really know how it feels when you are terribly hurt and have no place to go to find peace. Do comment on this guys, enjoy reading!


The Falling Angel


Falling down from paradise,

Learning to catch your disguise,

Spreading wings to collect the stars,

As I fall from Earth – to – Mars…



Dropping tears from the sky

Living before I finally die,

Opening myself from life’s bungs

As the air departs from my lungs…



Staring down to find a place,

Finding home for my disgrace,

Leading myself to the path of hell,

As I ring the sleeping god’s bell…



Waiting for more pain to come,

Tearing my soul so I go undone,

Turning back to see my track,

As I change from white to black...

4 comments:

sammysofttech.com said...

hello..
it's very intersted.... my life same as..this words..
i m always waiting her..

Rohan said...

Aha, Rose talking about thorns eh :(

Without black you would not appreciate white and vice versa. At these times all you can do is hold yourself together.

Even if u find one person in this world you can trust with your eyes closed, you have found the kohinoor diamond :P

The poem was brilliant, everything will be fine soon, beer is the best medicine for all the emotional atyachaar's you mentioned above

Take care and best of luck :)

Cheers

@ngel ~ said...

Spreading wings to collect the stars,

As I fall from Earth – to – Mars…
( nice imagery :) )


Dropping tears from the sky

Living before I finally die,

Really Nice lines ... :)

RAM said...

r u really felt in u r heart ???really heart touching poems......nice very nice..

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